Claim-Argument-Counter Argument

So, pursuasive essays.  My teacher told the class we had to do another blog post.  So here it is.

We are making a pursuasive essay.  May claim is I Should be Picked up From School More




Claim:  First of all, the bus isn't as safe as my car.  There is a lot of bullying on the bus (trust me, I know).  And there  might be angry people in cars because the bus causes a lot of traffic.  Last, the bus is more difficult to control.

Argument;  But what if your mom or dad is busy or sick and does not come?

Counter argument;  I didn't say ALL the time.  I could always go on the bus sometimes.